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Hetalia: America x Reader fic


Thunder rumbled, shaking your entire house and causing you to stiffen. Stupid weather... you couldn't believe it. Why did it have to rain on Halloween night?!

"So much for trick-or-treaters..." you sighed sadly, looking at the large bowl of candy on the table. Your mom and dad had left earlier for a Halloween party, so you told them that you would distribute the candy. You never cared for trick-or-treating anyway. You then looked at yourself in the mirror. You had even put on a costume for the kids. It was a witch costume that you had worn for a couple years now, but you didn't mind. You could hear the rain beating down on your house.

"I guess I can call it a night..." you said to yourself. Suddenly, there was a loud rapping on your front door, making you jump. That couldn't be a trick-or-treater, right?! A person would have to be crazy to be out in this weather!


You face-palmed. Yep... Alfred definitely counts as crazy. You rushed to open the door and Alfred wrapped you in a wet, bone-crushing hug before you even got a chance to look at his face.




"But you're warm…"

"And I'd like to keep it that way," you mumbled. Alfred slowly let you go, and stepped back. He took off his wet jacket to reveal that he was wearing a suit. You blinked. A suit? Alfred hates suits. "What are you wearing?"

"Can't you recognize a hero when you see one?" he asked, opening the front of his suit to reveal a Superman t-shirt. You suppressed a laugh.

"Should I call you Clark?"

"Only if I can call you Lois…"

You blushed, but tried to shake it off. Alfred was one of your oldest, closest friends... at least, you kept telling yourself that. Though over the years, you started developing different feelings. Alfred had grown up and so had you, but there was no way he liked you like that, right? He only considers you a friend, right?! "Why on earth did you come over, Alfred? It's awful outside… you could catch pneumonia!"

"I couldn't let my best friend stay home by herself on Halloween! Besides, a little rain is nothing! I never get sick!"

You rolled your eyes. "You do know that you're not really Superman, right?" you mumbled to the floor.

"Maybe..." said Alfred as he stepped closer to you, making you look up at him and you realized just how close he was. "But even if I'm not, I'll always come to your rescue, __________," he said, his hand brushing a piece of stray hair out of your face. "Man, I really did get you wet, didn't I?"

WHAT?! That's when you realized that he was talking about your costume. Of course he was talking about your costume, you perv! What were you thinking?!

"Yeah, you did... I'm gonna go change before I start to freeze," you said, beginning to feel the water soak through your costume.

"I'm sorry... it's a shame. You look so cute as a little witch!" he teased, only sending more blood to your cheeks.

"Idiot... I'm not cute," you mumbled. You hurried to your room. Well, this was unexpected. Why did Alfred just decide to show up? And why was he acting so... flirty?! You began to change, trying to take your mind off of things. You put on your favorite pair of comfy clothes. Was Alfred doing this on purpose? you wondered. Was he teasing you, knowing it would make you flustered?! Well, two can play at that game, you smirked.

When you returned to the living room, the TV was on, and Alfred was on the couch with a bowl of popcorn and a blanket. He had taken off his suit, now wearing the Superman t-shirt and a pair of sweatpants. "You're just in time! I brought some scary movies for us to watch!" he exclaimed. You sighed. You were used to scary movie nights with Alfred. They always started off fine, but they usually ended with Alfred clinging to a pillow for dear life. Thunder crackled outside once more, making you jump. "Already scared, huh?" Alfred smirked.

"Of course not!" you replied, sitting down next to Alfred and huddling under the blanket. He put his arm around you, another weird move. But instead of panicking, you cuddled into him, equally catching him by surprise. How do you like that, Alfred? Only, your plan began to backfire as you realized just how nice it felt to be in Alfred's grasp. He was so warm, and his arms were so— NO. Stop it, you scolded at yourself.

"Let's get this movie started!" Alfred exclaimed, pressing play. The movie began. It was called Revenge of the Werewolf Zombies 3. This wasn't gonna end well... you already knew his answer, but you had to ask.

"Are you sure you wanna watch this? I mean, I know that scary movies always—" He put his hand up to your lips.

"Finish that sentence... and you don't get any popcorn," he said, pushing a piece of popcorn against your lips, which you let him pop in and you chewed slowly. "Now, when you get too scared, just let your hero know!" Alfred exclaimed.

"We'll see who ends up being the hero..." you mumbled. A half an hour into the movie and it had been nothing but gore, gore... and more gore. The werewolf zombies were massacring an entire town. Meanwhile, Alfred's hand had continuously tightened around your shoulder. It was almost to the point that it was uncomfortable.


"We can turn it off if you—"


Before you even got a chance to realize that the werewolf zombies had torn Casey apart, Alfred wrapped his arms around you and pulled you up onto his lap, holding you against his chest.

"A-Alfred, what the—?!"

"DON'T WORRY! I know you're scared, but I'll hold on to you!" he practically yelled, his eyes still glued to the TV. You guessed that you were gonna have to be his pillow tonight... did he even realize what he was doing?! No, stay calm... there was no use trying to squirm out of his grasp. First of all, you knew that it was hopeless to try to make his strong arms budge. And secondly, you were pretty comfortable being held against him. He was so warm and you felt so secure.

So there you were, sitting sideways on your "best friend's" lap. You took the opportunity to rest your head against his chest...

Boy, was that a mistake.

That's when you realized just how tight his Superman t-shirt was on him. Even in the dim light of the movie, you could clearly see the definitions of his muscles under the shirt. You found yourself blushing again... since when did Alfred get so buff?!

Even his arms were all muscle... which made NO sense! Alfred was possibly one of the biggest gluttons you knew! He ate all the time, yet... before you even realized what you were doing, you ran your hand down the middle of his chest and down to his abs. You let your hand rest there for a moment, feeling what was sure to be a six pack underneath the thin material.

"Um... __________?"

His voice was enough to pull you out of your fascination. You froze, realizing what you had been doing. Oh my god, I was feeling him up! you thought.

"I— uh..." you looked up at him, his blue eyes making you lose focus. You two were so close... you had never been so close to him! "I was just— there was something on your shirt!" you said, pulling your hand off of his abs and pretending to toss something on the floor.

"Oh, really? Thanks," he said, sounding disappointed. He returned his attention back to the movie and held you closer. Suddenly, it felt like you were burning in his grasp. You began to hear the movie again.

"Oh no... I can't get out! SOMEONE HELP ME! PLEASE! THEY'RE COMING!"

Lightning flashed, lighting up your entire living room. You turned your head towards the television. A werewolf zombie was banging on the entrance to the victims shed and just as it broke through, the loudest crack of thunder of the entire night rattled your house.


You realized that the screaming wasn't from the TV. Both you and Alfred had been caught by surprise by the weather. Your arms had wrapped around him, and you buried your face into the crook of his neck. The next thing you realized was that only the sound you could hear was that of the pouring rain and Alfred's heart. You slowly lifted your head to realize that you were surrounded by total darkness. The power must've gone out... normally, your fear of the dark would have rendered you helpless, but— he was here.

"Hey, are you alright?" he asked.

"I'm fine... we just lost power," you replied, unconsciously snuggling closer to him.

"What a bummer... so much for our movie marathon," he said, though he really didn't sound that bummed. More lightning flashed again, making you stiffen. You heard Alfred chuckle, then he began moving his hand up and down your back. "You really don't like thunderstorms, do you?" he asked.

"Not really," you replied softly. His hands felt so nice! Suddenly you felt him shifting under you. He put one arm under your legs and another under your torso. He stood up as if you weighed nothing. "Al— Alfred? What are you doing?!" you asked, wrapping your arms around his neck.

"Taking you to your room, silly. You don't have any windows in there, so that way you don't have to see the lightning," he said.

"I could walk there myself..."

"But what if you tripped or ran into something?"

"The same thing could happen to you... especially since you don't live here and you're in the dark."

"Are you kidding?! Heroes don't—" BANG. Alfred took in a sharp breath. "Ow, ow, ow, ow, OW! My toe!" he cried.

"What were you saying, hero?" you teased.

"Shut up..." he groaned, as he staggered to your room. He placed you on your bed... your cold, empty bed. "Well, that's better! Now you don't have to see the lightning. I'll go back in the living room and sleep on the couch," he said, turning and walking away. You already missed his touch. Missed his warmth. Missed him. Thunder rumbled once more.

"W— Wait! Don't go!" You could faintly make out his silhouette as he stopped and turned towards you. "I mean... I just... I feel safer when you're with me," you said, your voice barely above a whisper.

"Really?" he asked. His voice sounded different. Lower? Your stomach did flips as he walked towards you. You felt him lay down on your bed. "Come here," he said. You snuggled in-between him and his arm, wrapping your arm around his chest. "How do I make you feel safer?" he asked. You felt yourself getting warm again. Really warm.

"Because," you mumbled. He chuckled.

"I won't leave you alone until you tell me why," he teased.

"B-Because... you're my hero," you said softly. You felt Alfred stiffen beneath you. And his lack of response was making you anxious. "Al?"

Before you could even process what was going on, Alfred was hovering over top of you. His face only inches away from yours.

"I love you so much," he said, as his lips met yours for the first time. And it was like they were made for each other. You had dreamed of what his lips would feel like, but your dreams were nothing compared to this. You both broke apart, breathing heavily.

"I love you too."
So, this is *stacyTHEemo, jumping on the bandwagon... OTL

I've fallen in love with some of these reader fics, so I decided to try and write one for myself. It was fun, but the POV was a slight challenge.

I originally got this idea after watching the episode where America makes Japan watch scary movies with him. XD

Either way, if you like reader fics, I hope you enjoyed! If you don't, please don't comment just to tell me that.

Thank you for reading! :heart:
Hero: Part 2 (WARNING: MATURE CONTENT)---> [link] :iconheplz:

Like Hero? Check out my other America x Reader fics!
Sweet Dreams: [link]
Don't Take the Girl: [link]

England x Reader fics
Shanghaied: [link]
Spring Dreams: [link]

Prussia x Reader fics
Lost Souls: [link]

Hetalia © Himaruya
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PrincessOfGaming101 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant
this was beautiful, just so beautiful.
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
I love it as it's not so cliché, and I'd fucking kill for Alfred!
EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*laughs* no. O^O
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist

EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*grabs all things made from America* DO YOU HAVE ANY OTHER HETALIA BAES?
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awkward... my oc is related to America...As in brother and sister...INCEST!!!!
EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
no. Disgusting xD
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, I used the wrong oc XD
EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
EikoChan27 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
LittleMissHungry Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
When your parents get invited to a party and you're alone
Moonstar005 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
What just happened.... DID I JUST... Oh wait, oh god. I used my OC who is related to America :')
AlexandriaLiristis Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015
then my parents walk in S$$$ go through the window in my parents room bye my hero
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
The link doesn't work.........
EpicGamerCat123 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
It got removed. At least according to the profile. I can't find it there. :(
Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
And then her Dad walked in.
MMORPGWizard Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Falling-To-Heaven Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought It was awesome, great job.

goddesskid Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015
What about part 2?
Bandanasquad2nd Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The link doesn't work DX
NeoniZigzagoon Featured By Owner Edited Jul 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
damn, the second part
nope, it doesn't work, nope
* nopescopes away *
StellaLockser Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was amazing! Nice job :)
fujoshifan43 Featured By Owner May 21, 2015
the link doesnt wooork helpp!!!!!
maria-newkirk-999 Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*flails arms around* WHY END LIKE THAT??????
xXRaggedFangXx Featured By Owner May 3, 2015
OMG! That was the best x reader I have read so far! *thumbs up*
L4M0N7 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
This was so adorable! I literally was squealing at the end!! I love it!!!!!
Sugar-Crazed Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Student Artist
The-UnRealIstic Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this everytime I read an America X Reader 

My friend,a girl named,America is Mexican and Speaks French like WTF
HowYouDoinXD Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
MaydayTheAussie Featured By Owner Edited Mar 4, 2015  Student Photographer
The feels, m8! The feels! >~<
EraOfTheChibi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I was worried that if Alfred tripped, he would land on me, and I would have landed face first on the ground.
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student General Artist
I was half expecting that the parents were gonna walk in and be like, "What's going on here?!" XD
luffylove2001 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
Nice! Really fluffy, I like it.
TrillaForced Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Whybot221 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
so awesome
13th-Program Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Student General Artist
Please send me the link of part two, I can't seem to get on the link you put on TT___TT I would really love to read the part two of thiz TTwTT
AnimeFanaticGirl Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Emmadance23 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Student General Artist
this is amazing skafheuiwbskfhq
B.A.P Emoticon#47 
Smashergirl14 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
omg that was sooo cute!!!
GemaNeko Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist


Roseflora5 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014
part two is not available! please re-upload! I must read it!!!!
xDaRkAnGelBaBex Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
This was brilliantly written. As I progressed further and further into the fanfiction, I began to feel a bunch of emotions. From tension to feeling loved. One of my favourite America x Reader ff, I appreciate how you written Alfred so in character, you are awesome!
Wolfsoul36 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
GAH! No! The part two is Gonneeeee~ 
queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
This is my No. 1 Favourite America X reader :3
I love this so much so cute and I just love it but for some reason I can't get to part 2. It says the page isn't found and I've tried typing in the link and it still doesn't work. I really want to read part 2. oh and what episode number does America make Japan watch scary movies?
cioccolatina2000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
Awww adorable *^*
BlackVeilKiller Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Writer
part 2??
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